Go back and read your post. You were in too big a hurry when you hit <send>, I think.

All of us English-speakers should try to write better English, particularly in terms of basic grammar, syntax, orthography, and sentence structure.

That first "sentence" begins with a conditional, should contain a participle rather than present-tense verb, as the conditional implies the presence of two clauses, which, in this case, should not have been separated into two sentences. The result is that the relevance of the second clause is lost.

RE